This image is a page from my sketch book and, you guessed it, this page is about the group crit that we had. The feedback which i got is in the bottom right corner of the page and is various feedback from the entire group. I initial dismissed some of the ideas however, made sure that others were thought about, decided upon and then executed.
This then helped develop my piece in order to make it look better and more accessible to an audience. The entry that i made into the competition used all of the points above (not the ones crossed out though) and now, i am developing the piece further for the final hand in.
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